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For those whom this might amuse:

From: Jonathan Kamens <jik@kamens.brookline.ma.us>
To: info@commutercheckdirect.com
Subject: Typographical error on “Commuter Benefits Order Fulfillment” email

OK, so admit it, I’m ridiculously picky, and this is a ridiculously trivial thing I’m writing to you about.  Still, on the off chance that someone there might care about it…

The “Commuter Benefits Order Fulfillment” email I just got from you reads in part as follows:

Participant Address On File:

street address

City MA, 02XXX

The comma should be after “City“, not after “MA”.  There isn’t supposed to be a comma between the state abbreviation and the ZIP code.

Do what you will with this.

Thanks,

  Jonathan Kamens